The story of the cycle (draft 2)

Name: Vishwa

Class: Perseverance 1

Date: 26 January 2014

Draft 2

                   Hi i am a BMX cycle. I can ride very fast and i am very durable. I am inordinate. I  cost around $400-$500 dollars. I was made in Taiwan and sent to a shop being new as if i am glowing. Suddenly, I saw a family coming to the shop looking for a durable cycle.

                  The boy gazed at me for a very long time. Then, James, the boy, told the parents to buy me as I am very new. My parents asked the price of me and i was terrified. I don't want to stay here! Its horrible! I thought. I cried just like the boy did. He said he loved me as he tested me and i was amazing. So Jame's parents sympathize with him and bought me. I was so ecstatic, that i almost cried. I and James had so much fun!

             We cycled to so many places such as some shops, deep slopes, and mountains!!! We were exhausted after riding for so long so James drank water and my tyres were pumped with air. After 20 years, i started to get old and rusty and dusty. Jame's parents said that this cycle is very old and he should throw it away to the trash. 

          Without thinking twice they just threw me to the trash just like that and i was still in usable condition. I cried again but this time even more. I was betrayed. Then i saw another man looking for a good cycle to sell. He found me and washed me so that i am as clean as any other good cycles. I was sold again by another shop. 

           Another family came and bought me and the same things James did but even more! We went to another country which is USA! I get to ride on snow! But he still kept me for more than 20 years and regularly repairs my damage and my chains by putting oil. As you can see, I am in good condition
and my tyres are big as usual.



          As time passes, I started to break down slowly. The boy’s parents said that it is dangerous to ride me more. I think they are right because I will hurt him if I have been continued

riding by him.THANKS FOR READING AND HAVE A NICE DAY! :)

The story of the cycle

Name: Vishwa

Class: Perseverance 1

Date: 26 January 2014

Draft 1

                   Hi i am a BMX cycle. I can ride very fast and i am very durable. I am inordinate. I  cost around $400-$500 dollars. I was made in Taiwan and sent to a shop being new as if i am glowing. Suddenly, I saw a family coming to the shop looking for a durable cycle.

                  The boy gazed at me for a very long time. Then, James, the boy, told the parents to buy me as I am very neoteric. My parents asked the price of me and i was terrified. I don't want to stay here! Its horrible! I thought. I cried just like the boy did. He said he loved me as he tested me and i was amazing. So Jame's parents sympathize with him and bought me. I was so ecstatic, that i almost cried. I and James had so much fun!

             We cycled to so many places such as some shops, deep slopes, and mountains!!! We were exhausted after riding for so long so James drank water and my tyres were pumped with air. After 20 years, i started to get old and rusty and dusty. Jame's parents said that this cycle is very old and he should throw it away to the trash. 

          Without thinking twice they just threw me to the trash just like that and i was still in usable condition. I cried again but this time even more. I was betrayed. Then i saw another man looking for a good cycle to sell. He found me and washed me so that i am as clean as any other good cycles. I was sold again by another shop. 

           Another family came and bought me and the same things James did but even more! We went to another country which is USA! I get to ride on snow! But he still kept me for more than 20 years and regularly repairs my damage and my chains by putting oil. They are real genuine owners and this is me right now. THANKS FOR READING AND HAVE A NICE DAY! :)

My auto biography

Hi fellow classmates and friends 

I am Vishwa from Anderson primary school.

My class is 6.7 and i like to collect a lot of money to buy my favorite

stuff and i like to swim and cycle very fast like a vehicle! My favorite color is yellow because it

is bright. My favorite food is Nasi lemak but the chilli sambal is very contagious because it has alginamoto. It

is a chemical which is not suppose to eaten by 8 months and below. So i don't eat nasi lemak a lot. I am 

quite funny. My best friends are Ruben and Sanjay from my Primary school. The reason is that when i was 

primary 5, he helped me to pack my sleeping bag but unfortunately it was lost... . As for Ruben, i was in the 

same  class in primary 3 and 4 and he helped me to do my project work and i was a success. So i owe 

something in future. My life is normal and i also get quite a lot of scolding. My favourite teacher is Mrs 

Steven and my favourite subject is science because i get to experiment some plants and cells and all that 

and it was interesting. My expectations is going to be good because i already made a few friends and they 

are friendly.

My struggles in Primary school life

Struggles in my success

                            Draft 2
Name: Vishwa

Class: Perseverance 1

Date: 5th Feb 2014

Hi everyone,

         I am going to share with you my struggles of success of getting into the express

Stream. From Primary 1 to Primary 6, teachers just say that I am bad in my Studies

Especially in English. Therefore, my parents decided to put me into tuition.

      In the end, I became better in my studies and I get A’s and A*s for my English.

 My math Grades also started to descend slowly. Therefore, in primary 4, my parents

Put me into a special tuition for mathematics. Then I realized how much money

They have spent just for me and I knew how concerned they were for me.

        Therefore, I sympathize with my parents and started concentrating in my studies

Rather than playing computer games and watching television. Nevertheless, I just

Could not control myself from watching or playing. So when the exams started ticking

In, I could not answer most of the questions and I failed most of the subjects. My

Parents were very disappointed and I cried that I failed my examinations. Then, I

Knew that playing games or watching television is useless to my success.

After that I have completely forgotten about the television and started to concentrate

On my studies. When the PSLE came, I started to do the exams as easy as pie and

Went to the express stream without any tense. From my experience, even after PSLE, I want to succeed.

In my studies and in my future and my dream wish is to go to Raffles JC.

This assignment is done by,

Vishwa from Perseverance 1.